Issue - "A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor."
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Society is a place where we human being live under certain rules and regulation for easy and happy life. But if some one is breaking that rules knowingly and commits a crime, that person must be undergone some punishment for his crime. In support of prompt i am agree with author till some extent. Authors claim can be agreed in some cases but it can be way strict in some cases. In below paragraph same can be understand with some example.
Firstly, we have to understand that person who committed a crime in what condition and what are the things that made him or her to commit a crime. Consider a example, if a person has stolen a money from some grocery store then before giving hin/her a punishment we need to identify the reasons and circumstances under which person commits a crime. if person who stole money is very poor and jobless and need those stolen money for school fees of his/her child, and person tried to collect money without committing crime but fails to get money then we have to give him chance to overcome his/her mistake. But a crime is 'crime' , so person must given some punishment. But, along with punishment he must be given some opportunity to overcome his/her mistake. In this case, person make to work for a store from which he/she stolen for certain period of time for free or for very low wages as a punishment. This kind of action keep a society a better place to live.
But on other hand , if person stolen a money from store just for wrong doing like gambling, for drugs, for drinks then this kind of person must be given a strong punishment. IF person a commit a crime for doing a another crime then it will be mostly possible that person is not committing such crime first time and it is also likely that person will be commit a crime again is future. For such kind of criminal, they must gone harsh punishment to understand their wrongdoing. this person should not retain their civil right
While, sometimes some people are made to broke a social contract by treating. In such case a person who is actual a face of crime is not fully responsible for crime, but a person who make him/her to commit a crime a main cause of crime and broken social contract. such person for their own benefits they force other to break rules. So, this kind of criminal who made other to crime for their own benefit also need strict punishment and should not retain civil rights.
In conclusion, it is very difficult to decide a punishment for a certain crime. first we deeply have to understand that condition in which crime is committed and who all are responsible for that crime.
After fully understanding of case only nature of punishment can be decided.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...ulation for easy and happy life. But if some one is breaking that rules knowingly and co...
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Line 1, column 258, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ent for his crime. In support of prompt i am agree with author till some extent. ...
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Line 1, column 263, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...or his crime. In support of prompt i am agree with author till some extent. Authors c...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me can be understand with some example. Firstly, we have to understand that pers...
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Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... him or her to commit a crime. Consider a example, if a person has stolen a money...
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Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'money'.
Suggestion: money
...sider a example, if a person has stolen a money from some grocery store then before giv...
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Line 3, column 349, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...ces under which person commits a crime. if person who stole money is very poor and...
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Line 3, column 625, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...me his/her mistake. But a crime is crime , so person must given some punishment. B...
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Message: Did you mean 'have given' or 'give'?
Suggestion: have given; give
.... But a crime is crime , so person must given some punishment. But, along with punish...
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...rson make to work for a store from which he/she stolen for certain period of tim...
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...rk for a store from which he/she stolen for certain period of time for free or f...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... from which he/she stolen for certain period of time for free or for very low wages as a pun...
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...ter place to live. But on other hand , if person stolen a money from store jus...
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Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'money'.
Suggestion: money
... But on other hand , if person stolen a money from store just for wrong doing like ga...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t. IF person a commit a crime for doing a another crime then it will be mostly po...
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Line 5, column 423, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have gone' or 'go'?
Suggestion: have gone; go
...e. For such kind of criminal, they must gone harsh punishment to understand their wr...
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Line 5, column 477, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: This
...ishment to understand their wrongdoing. this person should not retain their civil ri...
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Line 5, column 524, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...rson should not retain their civil right While, sometimes some people are made to...
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hould not retain their civil right While, sometimes some people are made to brok...
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Line 7, column 179, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...ully responsible for crime, but a person who make him/her to commit a crime a mai...
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Suggestion: Such
...se of crime and broken social contract. such person for their own benefits they forc...
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... In conclusion, it is very difficult to decide a punishment for a certain cri...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
...ecide a punishment for a certain crime. first we deeply have to understand that condi...
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Line 9, column 204, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...who all are responsible for that crime. After fully understanding of case only nature...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, then, while, in conclusion, kind of, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2206.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 483.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56728778468 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36783634425 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.422360248447 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 698.4 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8979519105 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.272727273 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9545454545 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86363636364 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 5.13820224719 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232357703074 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811062852946 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678972056898 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126745192904 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771613656384 0.0667264976115 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 48.8420337079 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.38706741573 81% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.