• It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the country side.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion
Many people think that residing in a developed city is a better option while others think that the villages are the best place for living to have a good quality of life. This essay will discuss why living in a city is the best option, but why villages are better to live a healthy lifestyle.
On the one hand, developed cities are now the foremost choice of residence by the people. National and International companies are keen to work in the city. As a result, the demand for trained skilled personnel is increasing in these cities which results in migrating people from rural to urban areas to get a job. For instance, a company name Airtel which has a head office in Mumbai advertises the requirement of 1500 staff in the call center.
On the other hand, living a healthy life is too important than any other thing. Some people are moving from urban to rural areas because these areas are free from pollution. Besides, the cost of living is also much lesser. For instance, Delhi, the national capital of India is now facing the most respiratory problems because of pollution in comparison to the villages which are some distance away from Delhi and are somewhat free from these disorders.
Finally, In my opinion, whether living in a metropolis or a countryside depends upon person to person. Take, for example, to choose a good career; it is better to live in a city. In contrast, villages are best as a residential place to live a healthy lifestyle because villages are not much polluted as cities.
In conclusion, cities and remotes areas are the choice depends upon the need of people. This essay discussed how living in developed cities is a better option for seeking job and career growth and how villages are proved to be a good residential place because of lesser pollution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, if, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75399361022 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52916921425 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479233226837 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.920161715 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0666666667 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1978179848 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693345092498 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622139830399 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118534384972 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068228138274 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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