Our life has become more complex due to modern technology. Some people think that we should do without modern technology and live a simpler life. Do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, many people claim the advanced technology is causing a complicated lifestyle. While many individuals believe that humans should live without using technology, I completely disagree with this view.
The first benefit of modern technology is that it enables people to connect around the world. The advent of many advanced technologies, particularly the mobile phone and the internet, has revolutionized the way humans contact others. For example, instead of waiting for many days to receive a response via post, nowadays, people can receive information within seconds via the internet or mobile phone. By having better communicating methods, it is easier for business owners to exchange investment ideas with their overseas partners, teachers could share educational materials to their students living in rural areas and many employees can work from their home. It can be seen that in many cases, technology provides a great deal of solution to ease people’s lives.
Another advantage is that advanced tech could replace humans to do dangerous jobs. There are many risky tasks which people should not be involved due to the likelihood of getting an injury or being exposed to toxic substances. Nuclear power plant workers, for example, are being constantly exposed to radioactive materials and they have a higher risk of developing cancer. As a consequence of this, to avoid causing detriments to the workers’ health, automatic robots are replacing humans to perform dangerous tasks in hazardous environments. It can be seen that advanced technology could prevent many dangerous threats to human’s working lives.
In conclusion, I believe that modern technology does not make humans’ lives become more complex but instead, they are helping many people to achieve a less complicated life.
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| 2019-08-19 | nguyenken91 | 56 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52669039146 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90299859951 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612099644128 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2418391969 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.461538462 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169825657642 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643468326734 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714211122054 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130576969637 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789544514991 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.