You have recently moved into a company accommodation and you are facing some issues at the place. Write a letter to your HR department. In the letter, mention:
A brief description of your accommodation.
What problems are you facing?
What do u expect the company to do about it.
Dear Sir,
I am writing as regards the apartment I was given last month. I moved in two weeks ago and I don't seem to enjoy it. The company gave me a two bedroom flat on the second floor of the building. The apartment is beautiful. Each room has a private toilet. The kitchen is spacious as well as the living room and bedroom. The bedroom is well ventilated. However, some of the appliances seems are in bad conditions.
The air conditioner in the living room and bedroom are not working properly.It doesn't cool the room. I was washing some dishes last night when the dishwasher stopped working. Also, the hot water doesn't run from the tap anymore. Most times the water is usually cold. I have been enduring these issues for some days now.
I would like the company to look into these issues. I suggest the company should get someone to fix the air conditioners or get a replacement if necessary, replace the dishwasher, and also get a plumber to fix the water heater.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...t month. I moved in two weeks ago and I dont seem to enjoy it. The company gave me a...
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...er stopped working. Also, the hot water doesnt run from the tap anymore. Most times th...
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...ing these issues for some days now. I would like the company to look into th...
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... the company to look into these issues. I suggest the company should get someone ...
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... a plumber to fix the water heater. I look forward to hearing from you. ...
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...to fix the water heater. I look forward to hearing from you. ...
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...I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, second, so, well, as regards, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62162162162 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53218868711 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616216216216 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8387391647 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.4375 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.5625 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0968413986364 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310419846568 0.0766984524023 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390259208904 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0712947313168 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381390545666 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.33 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.