You have a spare room in your flat or an apartment and you want to rent it to a student. Write a letter to the director of the accommodation office at the local college. In your letter;
Explain where your apartment is
Describe the room
What kind of person would you like to rent it
Dear Director,
I am a second year student of accounting in Bowen College. I rented an apartment in one of the university's halls of residence. I am writing to let you know that I have a spare room in my apartment I would like to rent to a student. The apartment is at Glenwood Avenue, Newark. The apartment number is 202. It is on the second floor of the building.
The room is quite spacious. It is 950 metres square in size. There is a private toilet in the room. The shower runs perfectly fine. The room has two closets. The first closet is used to store casual clothing and the second closet is used to hang winter coats or jackets. There is a central heater and an air conditioner in the room.
This room is available to a student. I would prefer a second year student or a year ahead. I am a gentle person so I prefer someone a cool personality. I also want a serious student probably we can study together.
I look forward to hear from you.
Yours faithfully,
Michelle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Director, I am a second year student of accounting...
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...n the second floor of the building. The room is quite spacious. It is 950 me...
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...rfectly fine. The room has two closets. The first closet is used to store casual cl...
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... and an air conditioner in the room. This room is available to a student. I w...
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...so I prefer someone a cool personality. I also want a serious student probably we...
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...dent probably we can study together. I look forward to hear from you. ...
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...udy together. I look forward to hear from you. ...
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... I look forward to hear from you. Yours faithfully, ...
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... Yours faithfully, Michelle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, look, second, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39130434783 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59944010258 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570652173913 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 9.0 16.3608247423 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0065140393 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 42.5263157895 76.5299724578 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.68421052632 16.8248392259 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.05263157895 4.34317383033 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.94845360825 304% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279972335754 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712096670912 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643083655787 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11526398565 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927866301787 0.0580467560999 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.1 8.37731958763 49% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.26 70.7449484536 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.7 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 8.62886597938 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 8.54432989691 66% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.