Too much time, money, and energy are spent developing new and more elaborate technology. Society should instead focus on maximizing the use of existing technology for the immediate benefit of its citizens.
The author asserts that a large amount of time, money and energy are spent in developing new and more elaborate technology and society should better focus on maximizing the use of existing technology for the immediate benefit of it's citizens.It is quite satisfying that the author wants to save time, energy and money for the betterment of the society and want to make use of the things that are already available to us but the whole point that he want to focus on is unidirectional and will only be beneficial for a short run.
Eliminating focus on new technology will lead to reduce the amount of innovations and will not be efficient to fulfilling the need of the society.Their are a large number of fields which will stop functioning without new innovations because the need of the society keeps on changing with time.New innovations will only help the society in long run because the world we live in doesn't remain same with time.
Think about the wireless communications.We started in the world of personal computers,telephones and it was fully dependent on wires for communication of messages.If someone would not have come with the idea of wireless communications, we would not have got amazing innovations like laptops,mobile phones and many more.If that particular person had thought this way that he should save his time, money and energy and he should better focus on using the existing technology, we would not have been using these gadgets and people would have still dependent on wired communications which would have restricted our reach.
Space technology is a very specific field which needs only new innovation to explore.If no new innovation will help we will be limited to only moon and mars, their are unimaginable part of universe and we have reached only a bit of it.Sticking to the existing technology will limit us and will leave the field unexplored.
Automation is a term which has gained popularity in the recent past.Their are huge gadgets in the industries which are being automated now a days.No manual works are needed which will eventually reduce the chances of hazard.If people would not have thought about it and would have limited their thinking to the existing technology than we would not have heard this specific term and still a large mass of people would have been risking their life.
So I conclude that using existing technology will definitely do good but adding new innovation will only help in advancement and will prove beneficial in long run.People should not think about the time, money and energy they are investing because it is for their own good.
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| 2019-08-23 | Sivajeet Chand | 50 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 28.0 12.4196629213 225% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2179.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 437.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98627002288 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85678488582 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441647597254 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 697.5 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 23.0359550562 313% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.955357105 60.3974514979 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 363.166666667 118.986275619 305% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.8333333333 23.4991977007 310% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286258528337 0.243740707755 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167283950796 0.0831039109588 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156837101985 0.0758088955206 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167283950796 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156837101985 0.0667264976115 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.5 14.1392134831 272% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.6 48.8420337079 -3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.4 12.1743820225 258% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.85 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.38706741573 120% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 11.8971910112 261% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 11.2143820225 275% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.7820224719 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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