Public figure such as actors, politicians, and athletes should expect people to be interested in their private lives. When they seek a public role, they should expect that they will loose at least some of their privacy.
The claim made by the author is acceptable for certain situation but this claim may not stand acceptable in every situations and I personally think it depends upon a lot of things. The first sentence says that they should expect people to be interested in their private lives, but it depends upon the type of privacy that the people are interested in.A female actor may be comfortable in talking her daily routine but may feel uncomfortable while being asked about her love life.
The way author has generalized the claim is not acceptable, the life of actor and athlete are quite different to each other, an actor like publicity compared to an athlete who may not ,he just want to perform in his game and he may not be comfortable to reveal more privacy compared to an actor,a politician may feel comfortable when asked about his policies but he may feel uncomfortable when asked about his son's education.
Though these public personalities should expect people to know about them a little more than they show but from a general public point of view how far the claim is true?They are human beings too, and every human has got some privacy in his life and he has got the right to not reveal it, he may not feel comfortable in revealing a certain thing to the public world though it seems to be small matter from our point of view.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 352, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...ivacy that the people are interested in.A female actor may be comfortable in talk...
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Line 1, column 354, Rule ID: FEMALE_ACTOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'actress'?
Suggestion: actress
...acy that the people are interested in.A female actor may be comfortable in talking her daily...
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Line 2, column 184, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...icity compared to an athlete who may not ,he just want to perform in his game and ...
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Line 2, column 295, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , a
...reveal more privacy compared to an actor,a politician may feel comfortable when as...
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Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...a little more than they show but from a general public point of view how far the claim is true...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...point of view how far the claim is true?They are human beings too, and every human h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 2235.4752809 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 239.0 442.535393258 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58158995816 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47560885531 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 215.323595506 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514644351464 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 704.065955056 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 23.0359550562 256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.475366469 60.3974514979 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 273.75 118.986275619 230% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.75 23.4991977007 254% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.21951772744 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214903300224 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129876840736 0.0831039109588 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105425877863 0.0758088955206 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150799407336 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679371904547 0.0667264976115 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.0 14.1392134831 212% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.05 48.8420337079 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 12.1743820225 206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 100.480337079 32% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 25.6 11.2143820225 228% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 11.7820224719 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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