The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In today’s society, it is inevitable that advertising is supremely ubiquitous – on the radio, TV, the internet, ect. The question of whether this industry is contributing to humans’ life quality living standard or deteriotating the quality of the commodities has been sparking a great controversy. Although Some believed that prohibiting all formulas of advertisement would be beneficial for people, but I completely disagree with this statement.
A school of thought holds that advertising offer us nothing short of drawbacks, which is understandable to the fact that mass media has been providing people with misled, filtered information, and even distorted truth. Thus, this industry drives people to paranoid and unsafe feeling. Having said that, if it were not for electronic and print advertising how could the producers promote their products to the consumers and how could we be capable of grasping an understanding about them. For example, as a testament to the power of promotion that not until the rampantly advertisments in 14th century did humans start to be in the habit of using toothpaste – one of the most integral/indispensable things/items in our daily lives. Therefore, it is advertising that always has a pivotal role to play in the commercial industry.
Furthermore, I concur with the notion that the advantages of advertising could firmly outweight its short-comings. Not only the comodities has been considerably increased but also a number of employment has been witnessed a considerable upward trend. Viet Nam is a case in point, where people are giving importance to the advertising majors as evidenced by jobs with various types and lucrative income, which directly leads to the decline in unemployment. Another example that could be cited is how the USA becoming one of the most superpowers in the world. In there, others major is pale in comparison with the advertising. The reason is they have an executive regime to ustilise the advertisements to make the best effort for the development of the country as well as others nations could visualize how beneficial their goods are.
In conclusion, I reject the conviction that giving a prohibition on advertising would be helpful to people and the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32960893855 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2771077814 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586592178771 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.62597315 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.2 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8666666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157799604851 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525687695796 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045973557933 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10251341768 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249742495609 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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