The progression of a nation to its optimum level is a major concern of the authority in most countries. It is an irrefutable fact that a country's success is evaluated by a myriad of factors, particularly, economic development. But, a section of society thinks that there are certain other elements which are pivotal. In my opinion, each factor has its own significance and all those elements together constitute to the progress of a country.
To begin with, financial stability is a major aspect which grade the development of a country. In other words, a nation with educated and employed people along with an economically stable governing authority ensures the success of a country. To give a clear example, Switzerland is regarded as one among the five successful countries in terms of economic stability. The number of destitute in Switzerland is less compared to all other nations. Therefore, financial security is an important key to succeed.
Furthermore, several other factors such as a sense of nationality feeling, sharing and extending helping hands to each other is also an inevitable element in the attainment of success. The India, for instance, survived the disaster Tsunami which happened in December 2005 not only by the financial stability but also, by the unity and sense of solidary among people. Yet another element which has to be consider is involving and inviting the povertystricken to the mainstream of the society. Eliminating discrimination of the destitutes by the affluent from the nation can also bring success as it will help people to live in harmony.
To conclude, a country's victory lies in a range of factors and each one of them has its own effective and equal importance. The government should make sure that the country is stable both economically and racially.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, as to, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11525423729 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03166473979 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549152542373 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2108494812 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.6 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256245887467 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773624374005 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486370197553 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151937340935 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00931778126782 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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