More and more people want to own famous brands of cars, clothes and other items. What are the reasons for this? Is this a negative or positive trend?
An increasing number of individuals desire to have luxury cars, clothes and other items. This tendency happens for several reasons, and I believe that it is a negative trend.
To begin with, there are some factors leading to the fact that many people wish to own famous brands items. First of all, as companies have to invest much money in producing luxury cars, clothes and other items, they often have high quality. For example, customers can ensure the quality of bags made by Dior, Hermes or Louis Vuitton. Moreover, luxury items are designed absolutely fashionably, which makes their owners look more stylish. Finally, owning luxury cars, clothes or bags might show people’s high social status because only wealthy individuals can buy these items.
In my opinion, this tendency is negative due to the following reasons. Firstly, it seems to be a waste of money buying famous brands items because they are too expensive. Therefore, people should use money for other priorities. For example, instead of paying two hundred million dong for a Hermes bag, this great amount of money should be spent on doing charity work. Furthermore, this trend might have negative impacts on the young. Because of wanting to have luxury lifestyle, many young girls do illegal acts such as prostitution to earn enough money to buy well-known brand watch, bags or clothes.
In conclusion, there are several reasons why the number of people wishing to own luxury items are increasing, and I think that this tendency is negative.
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Suggestion:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.112 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46927033757 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3013451956 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2857142857 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9285714286 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366631821823 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1185984303 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522943520846 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215770473595 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400710345363 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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