"The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries."
contemporaries know about the over all nature of the individuals of how good or bad a person is as they witnessed it in their era, instead the next generation be known every thing about the past from some scripts or by some means which signify about it as only forwarded to after them and not experienced instead.
some great works for example striving to bring a law stating lower class citizens to be given 50% reservation in politics , planting tree for people after them can be know to people after them .But works like struggling for farmers to get subsidies , working for salary hikes to low-income people in present era can't be known to people after them. so these are just praised by contemporaries . As its unknown to other people it does not mean the person worked for is not great
No one do works keeping in mind that they need to appreciated or must be recognised by others , even if done so ,there is no confirmation that this will be forwarded as it is to the persons lived after them in the form of written drafts or by any of the people if not dead who see the greatness of these people
Obviously kings-queens and social reformers who fought for well being of just for the ones after them, we have decided their greatness . Its won't be same in all the other cases too as we know about the greatness of the above mentioned people because of proper history and sufficient examples of their works
The greatness of individuals can be decided by the contemporaries at least as these people witnessed every thing happened in front of them and for those who live after them may or may not understand what its like to have the great works done by precedent people are worth of praise as these belong to another particular time segment
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, at least, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 315.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52053286777 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511111111111 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 63.0 23.0359550562 273% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 176.730982004 60.3974514979 293% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 289.8 118.986275619 244% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.0 23.4991977007 268% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.21951772744 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276954760635 0.243740707755 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145435357683 0.0831039109588 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855149246816 0.0758088955206 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170780225812 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494282747835 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.7 14.1392134831 224% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 48.8420337079 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 12.1743820225 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.29 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 100.480337079 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.8971910112 235% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.2 11.2143820225 243% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 11.7820224719 238% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.