The restoration of old buildings in major cities throughout the world involves enormous expenditure. This money would bring more benefits if it was used to provide new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It has been long debated that rehabilitation of historical building incurs large sum of money and this amount can be utilized to create infrastructure such as new houses and upgrade our read network. In my opinion both has their own importance in our lives, and it must be an amalgamation of restoring our heritage as well as building new infrastructure.
To begin with, historical buildings plays a vital role in knowing and understanding history associated with it so these buildings must be renovated. These building helps us in knowing its historical importance and facts, which eventually helps a visitor in connecting their thoughts with other relevant information.?? It, also, helps us in re-living the same period and understand how technology has evolved over time. Taj Mahal is one of the seven wonders of the wold and its architectural design is so complex that even with modern technology will face a lot of difficulty if re-created.
Similarly, building new homes are important too. In country like India, where a good portion of population is living in slums with poor hygiene. These houses will certainly help our poor citizen in leading a good life with decent level of living in hygienic surroundings. Our Prime Minister, Mr Modi has envisaged his vision by launching Avas Yojna to allocate homes to 2 crore people living in slums.
Additionally, upgrading our road network is equally important as it connect every nook and corner of our country. Constructing new roads will help in smooth traffic flow and will eventually save in dubious amount of time. Indian government has built Delhi Meerut expressway, which save more than 2hrs of commutation time in rush hours. It now takes just 40 minutes to reach Meerut from Delhi.
To my mind, we must invest funds to restore our historical buildings as well as upgrade or build new infrastructure as they both are equally important. One give understanding of our legacy whereas other assist in creating upgrading our current infrastructure to ease our lives.
- Tourism is encouraged in many countries. Does tourism brings more advantages or disadvantages to a country? 84
- Many parents believe that when their children read book for entertainment, they are just wasting their time, and that they should read only serious, educational books. What is your opinion about this? 78
- Employers should give longer holidays to employees to encourage them to do their job well. Do you agree? 84
- Today, many people want to get married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are younger. Is it a positive or negative development? 67
- Employers should give longer holidays to employees to encourage them to do their job well. Do you agree? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 69, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'connects'?
Suggestion: connects
...road network is equally important as it connect every nook and corner of our country. C...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, similarly, so, well, whereas, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12312312312 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95857221408 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597597597598 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9228001947 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.625 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.091100236194 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333184390402 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351300018165 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0557902859334 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303967005043 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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