Global Warming should be tackled by individuals as well as the government.
The world is becoming warmer day by day due to the greenhouse effect. The greenhouse effect happens when gases like carbon dioxide trap heat from the sun and the causes of global temperature to rise. The process by which world temperature is rising is called the greenhouse effect. Human activity is the main factor in the rise of greenhouse gases. Factories and vehicles produce emissions and exhaust fumes.
If governments and individuals work together to tackle global warming than we can have a better world to live. Governments could introduce laws to limit emissions from factories. They should invest in renewable energy like solar, wind or waterpower. Promotion of recycling could be a good option. Natural forests should be protected from deforestation. They can encourage people to tree plantation. In Bangladesh, there is a tax rebate for gardening in the rooftop which should be appreciated.
Individuals should also try to be greener. If we combine every individual's effort that must have a huge positive impact on global warming. We can use public transport rather than private transport. we should use the computer rather than paperwork. We can avoid a plastic bag when we are shopping. Recycling is the best thing we can do. We have options to choose less packaging product and we should go for that. Individuals should be responsible as if I am using a piece of paper that encourages cutting down trees.
Governments can introduce rules against global warming and every individual should flow that. Individuals and governments are dependable each other to overcome from this problem and they should work together. Our combined effort can tackle global warming and make the world a better place to live for all.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... causes of global temperature to rise. The process by which world temperature is r...
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Line 9, column 44, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ividuals should also try to be greener. If we combine every individuals effort tha...
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Line 9, column 64, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... try to be greener. If we combine every individuals effort that must have a huge positive i...
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Line 9, column 200, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...ransport rather than private transport. we should use the computer rather than pap...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15901060071 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77063350046 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558303886926 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3154017392 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.4782608696 106.682146367 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.3043478261 20.7667163134 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.913043478261 7.06120827912 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296418050215 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847989994028 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089800282117 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1880662182 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107650492591 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.76 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.