The following is a memorandum from the business manger of a television station.
" Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this time period, most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with our station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, local businesses that used to advertise during our late-night news program have just canceled their advertising contract with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to the program and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should restore the time devoted to weather and local news to its former level."
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The author presents a situation of a television station. He supposes that to decrease in time to weather and local news, their is a commensurate decrease in the revenue,so in order to compensate the losses he proposes to increase its time. However this argument is lacking cogency.Also the manger makes unwarranted assumptions,which make him dubious.
Firstly,manger perhaps says that he mitigated the alloted to weather and local news , but he hadn't mentioned how much has been decreased,10 minutes or 2 hours?
Secondly,he says that complaints had been increased,But are all those complaints are candid?as ther may be a scandal exposure , and a group of opposing people sham complaints against the television station.
Moreover,it is mentioned that local businesses had canceled their contracts.he persumes that this is due to truncated time to local news.However ther can be another reasons.Maybe the realtion between them is worsened or the station reputation among public has been decreased.
In conclusion the argument maintains cogency, If the manager can answer the above
three question as mentioned above
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.9520958084 23% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 55.5748502994 32% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 2260.96107784 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 171.0 441.139720559 39% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67251461988 5.12650576532 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 4.56307096286 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24886345808 2.78398813304 117% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 204.123752495 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637426900585 0.468620217663 136% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 705.55239521 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 19.7664670659 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5067128728 57.8364921388 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.571428571 119.503703932 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 23.324526521 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8571428571 5.70786347227 225% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.25449101796 324% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.20758483034 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225382664112 0.218282227539 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918065526278 0.0743258471296 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762795603196 0.0701772020484 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876890682777 0.128457276422 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882218417037 0.0628817314937 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 14.3799401198 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.3550499002 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.197005988 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.5979740519 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.32208582834 112% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 98.500998004 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 12.3882235529 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.