Science and technology will one day help in solving all of society's problems.
The greatest gift via evolution is the superior intellect that has been bestowed upon mankind. With this intellect man has analyzed and created forms of technology so advanced, it has propelled man to the top of the food chain. There are problems created as a byproduct of these advancements such as global warming, resource depletion etc. But it appears that the only solution here is to fight fire with fire.
First, science and technology has been a boon and a bane to mankind, with the latter being significantely more pronounced. At almost every stage in history when mankind has been faced with problems, science and technology has been instrumental in finding a solution. For example, when man created the horse drawn carriage, it was so widely popular. In England it was estimated the hay required and manure produced from the horses was exponentially increasing that in 35 years the streets would be filled up with 20 feet of manure. But this never happened, mankind discovered motorised vehicals as a mode of transportation which eliminated this problem.
As science progressed, its advancement brought with it solutions to the various problems. The human kind has made amazing progress in medical field to the point where average life expectancy has doubled since the medieval ages. With the creation of new techonologies such as artificial intelligence and machine learning man has also been also offload the mundance repetitive tasks to the machines which has further helped to increase the speed of advancement, hence more problems solved.
Science and technology has no doubt been a stable factor contributing to mankind's dominance on the planet. But it is also fair to point out that as new generations are readily becoming more dependant on science and technology, it has caused a scenario of over reliance of science to solved our problems. A healthy balance needs to be created between machine and human intelligence to ensure a successful future.
Thus through careful modulation of science and technology, the very technology that we create will be instrumental in solving all of society's problems one day in the future.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-09-22 | nitinramesh93 | 50 | view |
- The following is a petition to the city council of Centerville:"Over the past three years, there has been a marked increase in cases of 'sidewalk rage,' similar to the irrational anger drivers experience on the road, but instead among sidew 16
- Although sound moral judgment is an important characteristic of an effective leader, it is not as important as a leader’s ability to maintain the respect of his or her peers. 50
- Undergraduate students majoring in Business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities since those courses won’t benefit their future careers.Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agr 50
- Discussing controversial topics with those with contrasting views is not useful because very few people change their mind when questioned about their core beliefs.Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be 58
- Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people whom they serve 100
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 344, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'offloaded'.
Suggestion: offloaded
...machine learning man has also been also offload the mundance repetitive tasks to the ma...
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 191, Rule ID: DEPENDENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'dependent' on?
Suggestion: dependent
...w generations are readily becoming more dependant on science and technology, it has cause...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...nce to ensure a successful future. Thus through careful modulation of science a...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, thus, for example, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 349.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19484240688 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8808490879 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570200573066 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5314040925 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.3125 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8125 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3125 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217189012448 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638450477987 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968173520462 0.0758088955206 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139885708947 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127798840534 0.0667264976115 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.