Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this modern world these days, there is a common belief that people have too many choices than ever before. this could be both advantages as well as disadvantages in many life aspects. I would contend that having choices should be considered as beneficial situations as long as people control using it.
Firstly, I firmly believe that this is the benefit that people should make use of. As a people in a civilized society, we have the right to choose a variety range of things as long as it is under the law. Unlike in the past, people are less likely to have a choice due to the conservative mindsets about the way people should or should not do. Additionally, there are either limited advanced technologies or strictly social norms that make people have little chances to make a choice. As a consequence when inhabitants live the way as not required them to spend too much time thinking about options, life might be easier.
In contrast, people in recent days have more advanced technologies than ever before, which make life much more convenient along with more time-consuming in making choices. For example, we can choose more option to communicate with others, or we have the right to choose what sex are you stand for these days instead of just only male and female compared to the past. due to that, the more options people have the more time-consuming people have to face.
In conclusion, having too many options could be benefit somehow as well as its consequences it might bring to human life. I’m in the opinion that everything must be in its balanced.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
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Suggestion: Due
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78832116788 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60047701129 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529197080292 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.011832375 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.923076923 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241959216896 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870544976486 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435118717207 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137615548816 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355920288335 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.