Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?
Some people think that spending time on playing computer games has a variety of useful benefits as being a tool for relaxing after hard-working time or providing plenty of knowledge about different aspects of life. While this is true to some extent, I personally believe that these games are more likely a harmful impact, especially for the young.
On the one hand, video games can be both entertaining and educational. Nowadays, along with the advancement there are a lot of AR games that can transport users, or gamers to a virtual world where they can directly interact to the in-game environment and start their own adventures as super heroes to save the world or pirates to hunt for treasures in the deep sea. From educational perspective, These games encourage imagination and creativity, as well as concentration, logical thinking and problem solving, all of which are useful skill outside game context. Additionally, It has been shown that stimulation games like driving motorbike or riding horse help users get used to these activities before experiencing in the real-world tasks.
Nevertheless, I would argue that these positive effects are outweighed by some crucial negative effects. Games can be highly addictive because every games have their own leaderboards that promote competition between players. As a result, if you want to take the lead you will need a long process trying hard to surpass one by one. Spending a lot of hours each day on entertaining in virtual world can have effects ranging from lack of sleep to bad effects on academic performance at school, when homework is sacrificed for a little more time on computer or console. Furthermore, playing video games too much will make people ignore their social activities in school or in company and spend less time with their family.
For the above reasons, it seems to me that the potential dangers of video games are more significant than the benefits these games give to us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, well, while, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06790123457 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7749145051 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608024691358 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.224257629 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.833333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292740301105 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110545388311 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559164810445 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183863237139 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00579345473206 0.056905535591 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.