Having a good university degree guarantee people a good job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is thought by some that a certificate from a famous university provides people with good job opportunities, while in my opinion, it depends on what kind of jobs people want to find.
On the one hand, a degree from a reputated university is a must for academic jobs, such as teachers, engineers, and scientists. Starting a career in these fields needs specialised knowledge background, which is essential to handle problems during working life. Furthermore, a good university degree is also a proof of better training gained before starting a career, making graduates qualified for academic jobs. For example, statistics from the National Analysing Bureau show that nearly 85% of employees in academic industry are graduated from top universities all over the world.
On the other hand, one needs to get more experience to become excellent in some certain areas, such as doctors, laws, and artists. Working in these fields, people need to be more skillful and confident through practising over and over, which can be gained from their working experience. Furthermore, people may meet various kinds of problems in their working life, which cannot be included in textbooks. A physician, for example, needs at least ten years of working experience to master the basic skills and conduct an operation on his or her own.
In conclusion, whether a degree can provide a good job or nor depends on the field one is involved in. Pursuing a good job in research may need a good educational background, while being an expert in some other areas may need working experience most.
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: specialising; to be specialised
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, so, while, at least, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10769230769 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82353538512 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569230769231 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.3255403533 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 120.727272727 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5454545455 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191449582641 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780270062862 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812588566931 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146278494396 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896916030328 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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