Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed while others actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both aspects and give your opinion.
For the last few decades, people have influenced significantly with their actions on the world of fauna and flora. The damage made by humans now affects the whole planet, which has struggled with some serious issues. In my personal opinion, the question of whether to implement some solutions or leave it without action is very topical today, but the answer should be straight: of course people have to find reasonable solutions for this burning issue.
First of all, people have lived for many years without respect for the environment, which results can be observed nowadays. The scale of the issue is massive, and it will not be easy to recover, although humans can not just passively observe. For instance, tropical islands are flooded by rubbish, which can be cleaned up. However, if people do not stop buying products in plastic packages, the problem will return. Another aspect of life, on which people have an impact is the usage of non-electric cars producing toxic gasses. The is an easy way to tackle this problem by raising people’s awareness that they can share one car with others, use public means of transport or drive electric cars.
Although most people would generally agree that some actions should be implemented, few would deny that the phenomenon has covered the entire earth, so there is not much to do to reverse the problem. Moreover, they claim that individuals are not powerful enough to achieve success so they should not be bothered. That might be partially true, although if the individuals are not efficient, so the government should legislate a law to restrict the duty of behaving in an eco-friendly way.
In conclusion, I genuinely believe that all actions matter so all the people should appreciate them, the opponents as well.
- Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars To what extent do you agree 81
- For centuries, important parts of education have remained such as reading, writing and maths. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skills be made as a fourth skill added to the list. To what extent do you agree 73
- It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these view 61
- In some countries, most of people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home? 78
- Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed while others actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both aspects and give your opinion. 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 224, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...ruggled with some serious issues. In my personal opinion, the question of whether to implement s...
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Line 1, column 242, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
...serious issues. In my personal opinion, the question of whether to implement some solutions or leave it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, of course, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05762711864 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60504449535 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9665015033 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.769230769 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203178796152 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714153926339 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281085458683 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111231441973 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043632104983 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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