It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Some adults believe that to become an expert in some area people should be gifted with special talents. Others reject this thesis, as they claim that everything could be achieved by hard-working. I personally believe that the mixture of both is the way to reach success.
First of all, this is of course much easier when someone possesses certain talents because the process of learning runs much faster. The brain is somehow more able to acquire new information and when there is a need - activate them.
On the other hand, everything requires to exercise otherwise there is no chance to develop any abilities. Moreover, sometimes it is not so easy to discover some particular talent and people have to lead their lives as they don’t have any.
Contrary to that, some people argue there are no such things humans could not have learnt but what they do not realize is the fact that the process of learning might proceed in a long and exhausting way. Of course, someone can be persistent enough to achieve the goal but is it not a waste of time? For instance, after the same time, someone can be honoured expert in the other area in which he or she is talented.
To sum up, my personal opinion is that people should not tar others with the same brush, and when someone decided about its career path and he or she is a hard-worker, persist and resourceful there is a big chance he or she will achieve success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 40, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'exercising'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: exercising
... On the other hand, everything requires to exercise otherwise there is no chance to develop...
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Line 15, column 15, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...or she is talented. To sum up, my personal opinion is that people should not tar others wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, for instance, of course, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69444444444 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42519672458 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587301587302 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5497079075 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.545454545 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197224865472 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726093058042 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053319780284 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100486976063 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737020634739 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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