Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.
Modern Technologies deteriorate the thinking and creative ability of children, that is what most of the people now a days feel about. But according to me i disagree to the above mentioned fact. Internet is something which revolutionized the world. In fact, People are getting creative in their thinking process in order to achieve something. Social Media , the platform where everyone comes together to sort out a problem by thinking different approach.Nevertheless, there are both pros and cons about anything in this world . But , we should not blame Technology for it. Technology makes us lazy or sloth bear but it never affects our mind until we let it affect us.Anything in our control is good , if something goes out of our hand then you have to pay for it.
To Begin with, lets take an example of evolution of Linked In. How did someone think of this ? How did he collaborated most of the companies and Students in a single platform. How did this idea come from ? And all this is possible just for one Factor i.e Internet and Technology i.e smart phones which people often use more than their Laptops and they install every kind of application that is useful. So, it totally depends upon us what we choose to become and how to use it.There is Android Linked In app, people prefer that, they talk with lot of recruiters , build networks and in that way they get internship or jobs or come to know what all is happening in this world.
Secondly, there are instances where children of age 15 to 20 build android or IOS applications and they make money for their living from that age. Can you believe that? All this is possible because Technology enables them to think in a unique way in order to solve a particular problem or develop something fun and engaging. Children are getting more platforms now a days to share their thoughts and ideas and in order to get a chance to pitch their thoughts.
In conclusion, Technology has taken this world to a next level however it has both pros and cons and it totally depends upon the individual in which way they use it and how they are in control of and aware of these negative effects.So, i disagree with the fact that Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.
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- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. 66
- Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past. 70
- "The Best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative Ones" 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65994962217 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64786241617 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52644836272 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.0084853187 48.9658058833 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.823529412 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3529411765 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255873322421 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653734127235 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109852764315 0.0737576698707 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183445927714 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16389881303 0.0645574589148 254% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.