Undergraduate students majoring in Business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities since those courses won’t benefit their future careers.
"Undergraduate students majoring in business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humainties", I do agree with the author's statement. Humainity can not be learned through one course or some hours of lectures. And at that stage of time when a student is accelerating towards his career, he should be more focused towards the main subjects which can be helpful his professional development. To support the statement, let's discuss some of the points.
Humainty, or how to behave and live in a society, can not be taught in a day or two. It is from the childhood, and can be learned with the passage of time. I do agree that Humanity, as a subject, is very important, however, the school from where this course should be done is home. A student, who is planning to study undergradaute, is towards end of his teenage, mainly. And msot of the humans are matured enough till that age. By this point I would conclude that the author's statement is right.
Let's take another view bolstering author's statement, undergraduate studies are very important and cruicial in each student's life. Becuase it is, most of the time, a last step towards the professional life, yet, they have to learn many things to be succesful ahead. And at that crcucial time, instead of having those social subjects, they should undertake courses related to their majors, which can enhance their knowledge and skills towards the profession. And they can improve their lacking if there is any particular subject. Therefore, this point also proof author's statement right.
Keeping my last point bolstering the author's statement, money is always important in each phase of life and in students' life, with those costly credit hours, one should be furgile towards the selection of courses. A weightage in terms of return should be consider, while spending money for any course. Therefore, author's thesis is acceptable.
In conclusion, I would agree with the author's thesis, by undertaking above mentioned examples. Apart from a subject, humanity can be taught in every class by the professors who are giving lectures on other topics, can spare some minutes and share his knowldege of humanity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, while, apart from, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 366.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04918032787 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82934546069 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532786885246 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.7073495743 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265205131958 0.243740707755 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764384508904 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103966481357 0.0758088955206 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148732832622 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947564665221 0.0667264976115 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.