Many parents believe that when their children read books for entertainment, they are wasting their time, and that they should read only serious educational books. What is your opinion about this?
Reading academic books enhances the children’s skills and studying other books decreases their potential, according to some parents. I opine that focusing on educational books fosters their career but also some time can spend on entertainment books to help them in other ways which discuss in this essay.
Some parents think that children studying books related to subjects increase their knowledge and talents. They also accept that the other entertainment books are reading by the people assumed waste their time and spoil their education. When the children concentrate and spend more time on academic books, they can score reasonable marks in the examination that further helps them to obtain the admission in the renowned universities, for example, IIT’s, NIT’s and IISc. I agree that spending more time on learning books explores a plethora of information which aids their profession in the future.
On the other hand, it is widely arguable that entertainment and cosmic books improve their creativity and logical thinking. It also considers that this could provide the chance to intensify their reading ability. This magnifies the learning of new vocabularies and terms that may helpful for their day-to-day life. This is exemplified exuberantly in a lot of fun books with pictures, which exacerbate the kids to quickly understand and memorize forever. Therefore, although books provided in the schools could improvise their subject knowledge, entertainment books nurture their rationale thinking skills.
To conclude, in my opinion, I strongly believe that academic books provide them the opportunity to learn the technical aspects whereas cosmic or fun books certainly create more interest and hungry to read a lot of books.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, whereas, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53159851301 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82527391899 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557620817844 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.8554519252 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.272727273 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365277009435 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148731593595 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649384871917 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221993299693 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669872538444 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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