you successfuly passed a job interview.you were told to strart your work on july 10th but unfurtunatley you can not attend your workplace on that day.write a letter to your new employer . in your letter:
express your appriciation for the interview
explain your situation
suggest a solution.
Dear Mr. Jackson,
Thank you very much for give me the opportunity to join your team, and I am really looking forward to starting my work in July.
Since I entered the field of cloud service, I hoped that I can be a member of your company. To realize this goal, I accumulated experience in a local it company for 3 years, and got several qualifications in free time. Finally, I achieved the goal.
I am expected to be on my position from the first day of July. But unfortunately, my son got sick yesterday and we are now in the hospital. According to the doctor, he has to stay at hospital for at least 1 week. my husband is currently on a business trip in America. so I have to take care of my son and return to work a week later.
I am sorry for the inconvenience this may cost to you. it would be appreciated if you could send me the work manual and instructions in advance, so that I could read them when I looking after my child, and get prepared earlier.
Your's faithfully,
Ingrid
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Jackson, Thank you very much for give me the oppo...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... forward to starting my work in July. Since I entered the field of cloud servi...
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Line 9, column 154, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
... I accumulated experience in a local it company for 3 years, and got several qualificat...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e time. Finally, I achieved the goal. I am expected to be on my position from ...
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Line 13, column 214, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...o stay at hospital for at least 1 week. my husband is currently on a business trip...
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Line 13, column 269, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...urrently on a business trip in America. so I have to take care of my son and retur...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... son and return to work a week later. I am sorry for the inconvenience this ma...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...the inconvenience this may cost to you. it would be appreciated if you could send ...
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Line 17, column 177, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...advance, so that I could read them when I looking after my child, and get prepare...
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Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r my child, and get prepared earlier. Yours faithfully, Ingrid
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, look, may, really, so, as to, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40211640212 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71557979403 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634920634921 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8060751748 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3333333333 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184056761962 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654348739158 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749912835656 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10208274783 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579562986714 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.