Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Employers seek personal information from the job applicants are more usual since industrialization. Some people think that providing data to the company is risky, whereas others believe is essential to submit. Therefore, this essay will discuss the benefits of submitting the details to the job providers and its consequence.
On the one hand, it might be said that job-seekers should provide all their personal information to the organization when they apply for a job. Employers need the candidates' details to ensure whether they match with their expectations. For example, some work, especially marketing, requires a lot of travelling, often should stay away from their family. Therefore, the employer can understand whether the candidate suits for the present openings, also it will help them to contact the applicants when the opening arises suitable for his capacity and ability. Therefore, the personal data provided in the application form when they apply will be useful in future and ease to contact by the company.
Conversely, the others said that providing data to the organization would be destitute and chances for misusing their details to the strangers. In today's technology world, data mining from the internet is serious issues, therefore who apply for a job online might very conscious when providing personal information. A recent study shows that data submitted by the job seekers on the internet through online have taken illegally and sold information for some other purposes. As a result, job applicants must be very careful when they accord their personal information, specifically their mobile numbers.
To conclude, I opine that the employers solicit personal information about the applicants have significant reasons, but they also should ensure the safety and security of the candidates' details.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, if, so, therefore, whereas, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48432055749 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87090676382 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543554006969 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1503809746 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.076923077 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309582931772 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118021703599 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379717149483 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180477069689 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640988889357 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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