New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages ?
It is known that modern technologies have affected heavily to the way children spend their free time. In my opinion, everything also has both good and bad side.
Firstly, on the good side, technologies are normally thought as computers, laptops, smartphones, portable devices with high power chips, many useful functions. There are useful things can help people especially children in their school stuff. For example, when children want to find out what is the definition of universe or many different things else, they can also find all information on the internet by using their smartphones and computers. For further, they can play games in their free time or spend their free time watching things that they feel curious.
Secondly, on the bad side, latest technologies can also make children easily addict to it as they have too many useful functions. When the children have free time, they also find things to relax so that they always find that computers, smartphones with social media, games can satisfy them. But with lack of time management skill, they would easily stuck in those things. For example, children may find that games are really interested. As a result, they would spend all their free times playing games and it leads to their bad results in schools.
In conclusion, i think new technologies have both good and bad side so that children must learn how to use them in a right way not to waste their free time.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-11-18 | kevinluffy2001 | 56 | view |
| 2019-08-08 | Xiao Hao | 73 | view |
| 2019-07-13 | jamesdamond | 84 | view |
| 2019-04-02 | newwritter | 73 | view |
| 2019-02-24 | Thao Phan Phuong | 56 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 326, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...t what is the definition of universe or many different things else, they can also find all inf...
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Line 9, column 26, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the latest'.
Suggestion: , the latest
... curious. Secondly, on the bad side, latest technologies can also make children eas...
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Line 9, column 350, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'stick'
Suggestion: stick
...ime management skill, they would easily stuck in those things. For example, children ...
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Line 13, column 16, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...results in schools. In conclusion, i think new technologies have both good a...
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Line 13, column 113, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a right way" with adverb for "right"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...hat children must learn how to use them in a right way not to waste their free time. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99176954733 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46584829154 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526748971193 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5038396958 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.083333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30805183866 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138914053272 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126455802414 0.0667982634062 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248619327001 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619129478966 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.