Some people think it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that girls and boys benefit more from attending mixed schools. Which education system do you think is better? Why?
it is believed by few people that co education offers more benefits as compared to single gender schools. In my opinion, kids of all genders should be taught togther right from the beginning of their studies. In this essay, we will delve into the importance of sending children to joint education schools.
Sending kids to mixed school offers distinctive advantages. Firstly, having boys and girls in the same classroom creates a competition between the different genders. this would mean that students are more motivated to succeed in their goals, often leading to better scores. Additionally, girls and boys will get to learn team building skills which would in turn help them to understand each others thought process. it will also make them ready for the real world where both the genders have to co-exist. it is quite natural that boys and girls have different perspective and by studying together they can surely learn from each other to see the world from a different viewpoint.
On the other hand, chirldren would be confined to the same kind of environment while studying in single sex schools which often makes them hesitant to talk to people of different gender. Furthermore, it can increase the issues related to gender inequality because they might not be able to adjust and understand each other easily. Stating an example of my friend, who studied in all boys school, later had to struggle a lot during his college days to start a conversation with other girls.
Overall, studying in co-educational instituions has more merits as compared to segregated schools. Apart from a better learning experience it also help both the genders to grow holistically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, while, apart from, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13405797101 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65507285931 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590579710145 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0285597763 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.214285714 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219537450724 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762069288729 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609348106644 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136850387675 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057707344384 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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