Do you agree or disagree:It Is important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Can a person loose his old friends while making new ones? Though this question can seem to be absurd for most of us , some people, however, are of the opinion that people should always maintain their old friends, rather than making new ones. They think that the old friends are the best companions of peoples’ lives and will never let them down. But if we dig a little bit deeper, we will realize that at some point life the old friends were also not familiar to us and were new. Personally speaking, I am of the opinion that people should never stop making friends for the following reasons, mentioned in the body paragraphs.
To begin with, the process of making friends is not being at will and can not be restricted. In other words, people can’t just tell themselves that they do not want to make friends anymore and will not speak to anybody from some point on. Making friends begins when you first start to talk to strangers and gradually gain more and more information about them. Then, on the next stage we acquire trust and reliability, which is the main aspect of the friendship. And finally, after a while we understand that there has been created some kind of emotional and moral relationship between you and that stranger. So, this process is uncontrolled and inevitable. Moreover, every new friend is a door to new relationships, knowledge and adventures.
Secondly, friends are not being enough. Life is full of new adventures and troubles, which all will be rather dull and insurmountable to deal with without friends. You are exposed to new experiences from every step you take and at those stages your old friends can not be always with you. At that time, you will always need to make new friends to feel yourself comfortable in a new atmosphere. For example, I have a lot of old school-friends now, who I can easily rely on and share my feelings with. But, soon, after graduating, we will choose different paths to our dreams and will have to part with each other. So, then we will make new friends in our new colleges and universities, without forgetting about each other.
To wrap up, I am strongly of the opinion that making new friends is a natural tendency that we can’t avoid and due to the explanations mentioned above, I do believe that we should keep making friends in all periods of our lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, kind of, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71601941748 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60725690683 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51213592233 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4827264555 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.15 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316121615699 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103222230119 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686812040813 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205386828223 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270551025111 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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