Some people think that the role of parents is to discipline their children and teach them about right and wrong. Other people consider that the main responsibility of parents is to nurture their children and provide them with a safe environment to grow up in.
Children are the tender buds of the society and they need proper care and upbringing by parents. It is argued by some people that the main responsiblity of parents is to provide care, support and safe environment while others think parents should be strict and teach them morals and values in life. This essay with discuss both the view points and come to conclusion.
Some people are of the opinion that parents should be strict and teach them how to be well behaved and disciplined. As it is rationalized by the proponents that children of strict parents grow up into dynamics and well balanced personalities. Moreover, they soon realize that there are limitations for everything in the world and at a very early age they learn to mould themselves into emotionally stable and non-aggressive individuals. Parents guide them in their decisions explaining the pros and cons of decisions in situations in life, which helps them to develop perspective and way of outlook towards things. However, in my opinion, if parents are slightly strict with their offsprings and they give them freedom to develop their own thinking, and guide them about the right and wrong, it would encourage development of child's well balanced personality.
On the other hand, I strongly assert that the most crucial duty of parents is to provide their children with the basic necessities of life such as food, water and shelter. In addition, initial care, love and support also plays a pivotal role in proper upbringing of a child. It incorporates important values in life such as empathy, kindness, respect in child. Furthermore, providing a livable and safe environment is of prime importance, protecting them from the negative influences in the society. Feeling safe allows children to develop relationships, trust and become confident.
In conclusion, in my opinion, although I agree that parents role is to teach their children discipline and moral in life, but parents responsiblity to nurture their child is of much more importance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 114, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...s is to provide their children with the basic necessities of life such as food, water and shelter...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1641337386 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87323927333 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531914893617 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5937452633 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.357142857 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.474495114875 0.244688304435 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137340545166 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107486672187 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278961175853 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378705461755 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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