television influences on people
Todays, televisions and movies play an important role in a society; television is one of the most appliances in any body's home. All the family from the youngest to oldest watches their own specific programs. I believe that television and movies as an important media affect people lives directly and indirectly. I have this opinion because of two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First, some programs on this Medias have direct effects on all people. This kind of program can be a training children program or comedy serials for adults. I have an indelible memory for this concept, when I was 6 years old; there was a children show that has so many training programs. The main characters were two ice creams that taught children basic training by playing, songs and dancing. For example how brush their teeth, or how wash their hands every day. I remember I loved that show because I love the main character which were two ice creams; besides, not only it was useful, but also if was so fun for children. Television have some direct influences on adult too, However, surely, they have more complex process than children shows. Movie stars play an undeniable role on ordinary people, and many people try to be more look like their favorite stars. T.V stars have great influences on fashion and people appearance; therefore, many people always try to be more look like T.V stars.
Second, some influences are not as simple as I mentioned above. Not only they have more complicated policy behind them, but also they can influence on much more people. In addition most of them contain basic believes of a society such as politic, religious, economics, etc. they try to affect unconsciously, For instance, we all have seen some movies about wars, and how a soldier or troops admire in such this movie, like an actual hero. They try to say people that battle is a holy sacrifices, and any body fight against the enemy is so brave and every body loves him. On the other hand, these kind of movies completely denies or omit the actual horror and murder and all the homelessness that may accurse among a war for hundreds of people. Consequently, people in this society after watching some movies in these kind of genre, gradually will believe that war is a holy action.
To sum up, I strongly believe that movies and television has undeniable effects on people, because of two reasons. First, they have some direct effect like what we can see on children show, or the changes on fashion style that we have seen among ordinary people based of influential people's style. In addition, there are some indirect influences to affect a whole society believes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the oldest'.
Suggestion: to the oldest
... home. All the family from the youngest to oldest watches their own specific programs. I ...
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... if was so fun for children. Television have some direct influences on adult too, Ho...
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Suggestion: V
... more look like their favorite stars. T.V stars have great influences on fashion ...
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Suggestion: V
...eople always try to be more look like T.V stars. Second, some influences are no...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...y can influence on much more people. In addition most of them contain basic believes of ...
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Message: Did you mean 'anybody'?
Suggestion: anybody
...e that battle is a holy sacrifices, and any body fight against the enemy is so brave and...
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...very body loves him. On the other hand, these kind of movies completely denies or omit the...
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...s society after watching some movies in these kind of genre, gradually will believe that w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2213.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 461.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80043383948 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46385495925 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494577006508 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 700.2 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8371706022 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2173913043 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0434782609 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5652173913 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233742290911 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688772687839 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789200273459 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167878947786 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043185064649 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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