Vaccinating children against preventable diseases is not unnecessary but also dangerous.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the advanced research and development of modern medicine, many diseases have been prevented and eradicated worldwide. However, few people think that immunizing young kids is of no use and sometimes can be life threatening. I completely disagree with this, and in the below paragraphs I would elaborate on why vaccinating children against preventable diseases is essential.
Vaccinations are the boon of modern medicine, which has helped us to overcome many diseases. Even though vaccines were invented in late 1800’s, it was regularized only in early 19th century. As per World Health Organisation (WHO), immunization has enabled the people to completely come out of certain diseases globally. For example, as per the WHO released report there has not been a single reported case of polio among children for over a decade globally, which is a major success to the humanity, as in the mid 1900’s the percentage of children attacked with polio were very high, and continuous global immunization has eradicated the disease forever.
Often, the mandatory vaccine lists are released by the government of that particular region based on the demography, history and research. Although, there are certain set of immune which are general globally for example vaccine against Chicken pox, there are certain vaccines that the regional, like that of malaria. Thereby there is a thorough research that goes behind any medicine.
On the flip side, there are parents who oppose to government and are against vaccines primarily because they think, it is against nature to immune a child and it limits his/her development, but there is no strong evidence to prove their point, thereby I consider it as a futile argument.
Finally, if science has enabled the manto prevent and eradicate certain hazardous diseases and helped in extending the life span of humans, immunization is highly beneficial.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 335, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'thorough research'.
Suggestion: thorough research
... like that of malaria. Thereby there is a thorough research that goes behind any medicine. On ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40666666667 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85925203895 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586666666667 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.1788597278 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.166666667 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184668532755 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676204778088 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656086769132 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101937919609 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434678137684 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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