Write about the following topic:
Some high school students work part-time in addition to going to school.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of high school students having
part-time jobs?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own
knowledge or experience
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:10.0pt;line-height:115%;mso-layout-grid-align:
none;text-autospace:none"><span lang="EN">These times many teenagers are doing part time job with study. While, part
time job offers certainly some benefits like financial stability and real-life
work exposure. At the same time the drawbacks of part time job cannot be
overlooked. In some cases, it has seen that students who are doing part time
job diverted from their actual life goal. I will be going to compare side by
side both advantages and disadvantages of part time job in my essay.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:10.0pt;line-height:115%;mso-layout-grid-align:
none;text-autospace:none"><span lang="EN">There is no denial in accepting the fact that work with study always
teaches some good real-life lessons and give a sense of financial freedom. For
example, a student who is also working knows how to manage time effectively and
how to deal with customers. Sometimes there are cases where parents are unable
to pay high tuition fee for studies, in such scenario part time jobs enables
child to pay his/her tuition by their own: that is how part time job pave a way
to encourage education.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:10.0pt;line-height:115%;mso-layout-grid-align:
none;text-autospace:none"><span lang="EN">However, part time jobs offer good benefits but there are several drawbacks
come along with them, like distraction towards studies, or complete drop out to
study. A survey conducted on school dropouts in London reveals the 77 percent
out of total drop outers are part time worker. Financial liberty in early age
can deviate teen towards bad habits like smoking and liquor consumption.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:10.0pt;line-height:115%;mso-layout-grid-align:
none;text-autospace:none"><span lang="EN">After analyzing both arguments, It is not hard to find part time jobs
carrying more advantages over drawbacks. These all drawbacks can be mitigated
by introducing some restriction or spreading awareness among children. For
example, schools can provide counseling to part timers and make them understand
how to best utilize money and time and their primary focus ought to be on
study.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ers are doing part time job with study. While, part time job offers certainly some ...
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...ike financial stability and real-life work exposure. At the same time the drawback...
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... drawbacks of part time job cannot be overlooked. In some cases, it has seen that studen...
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Suggestion: part-time
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...ws how to manage time effectively and how to deal with customers. Sometimes there...
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Suggestion: part-time
...ition fee for studies, in such scenario part time jobs enables child to pay his/her tui...
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...s/her tuition by their own: that is how part time job pave a way to encourage education...
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Suggestion: Out
...outs in London reveals the 77 percent out of total drop outers are part time work...
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Suggestion: part-time
... percent out of total drop outers are part time worker. Financial liberty in early age ...
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... both arguments, It is not hard to find part time jobs carrying more advantages over dr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, while, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2234.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 7.27687296417 5.12529762239 142% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 9.66441112791 2.80592935109 344% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579804560261 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 166.521832386 49.4020404114 337% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 203.090909091 106.682146367 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9090909091 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 28.0 4.38176352705 639% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17145306046 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982033985992 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456362288052 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0609493565341 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598585386545 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.8 13.0946893788 205% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.23 50.2224549098 20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 25.24 12.4159519038 203% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.