Write about the following topic:
Some high school students work part-time in addition to going to school.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of high school students having
part-time jobs?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own
knowledge or experience
These times many teenagers are doing part time job with study. While, part time job offers certainly some benefits like financial stability and real-life work exposure. At the same time the drawbacks of part time job cannot be overlooked. In some cases, it has seen that students who are doing part time job diverted from their actual life goal. I will be going to compare side by side both advantages and disadvantages of part time job in my essay.
There is no denial in accepting the fact that work with study always teaches some good real-life lessons and give a sense of financial freedom. For example, a student who is also working knows how to manage time effectively and how to deal with customers. Sometimes there are cases where parents are unable to pay high tuition fee for studies, in such scenario part time jobs enables child to pay his/her tuition by their own: that is how part time job pave a way to encourage education.
However, part time jobs offer good benefits but there are several drawbacks come along with them, like distraction towards studies, or complete drop out to study. A survey conducted on school dropouts in London reveals the 77 percent out of total drop outers are part time worker. Financial liberty in early age can deviate teen towards bad habits like smoking and liquor consumption.
After analyzing both arguments, It is not hard to find part time jobs carrying more advantages over drawbacks. These all drawbacks can be mitigated by introducing some restriction or spreading awareness among children. For example, schools can provide counseling to part timers and make them understand how to best utilize money and time and their primary focus ought to be on study.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
These times many teenagers are doing part time job with study. While, part time job of...
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Suggestion: part-time
... doing part time job with study. While, part time job offers certainly some benefits like...
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Suggestion: part-time
...sure. At the same time the drawbacks of part time job cannot be overlooked. In some cases...
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...it has seen that students who are doing part time job diverted from their actual life goa...
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Suggestion: part-time
...de both advantages and disadvantages of part time job in my essay. There is no denial i...
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Suggestion: part-time
...ition fee for studies, in such scenario part time jobs enables child to pay his/her tuiti...
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Suggestion: part-time
...s/her tuition by their own: that is how part time job pave a way to encourage education. ...
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Suggestion: part-time
... way to encourage education. However, part time jobs offer good benefits but there are ...
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Suggestion: part-time
...77 percent out of total drop outers are part time worker. Financial liberty in early age ...
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Suggestion: part-time
... both arguments, It is not hard to find part time jobs carrying more advantages over draw...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, while, for example, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90721649485 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4772318521 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587628865979 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2837987692 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28912503304 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105945545759 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541583889656 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170127588434 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497260082274 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.