You have recently ordered an item through the Internet, but are not happy with the purchase. Write to the company. In your letter:
Describe what you purchased, Explain why you are not happy with the purchase, tell them what you would like them to do about the situation.
Hi Team.
I am writing this letter to express my regards about my recent purchase from your website. I recently ordered a pair of shoes from your website with the order ID: BVX097854. It was for a black coloured Puma of size 9. Please see the bill attached for price and other details.
After the product was delivered to me this morning, I unboxed it for a trial. Wherein I noticed that the size of shoes that I received is 7. Therefore, it is impossible for me to fit my feet into them. Though I appreciate the quality of the product, its reasonable price and your elegant customer service, I still cannot accept the size of the pair that was delivered.
Hence, I request you to initiate a return for my received pair and in exchange, provide me with a pair of shoes which is of size 9.
Hoping to have an immediate response and resolution to the above issue.
Yours Sincerely,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi Team. I am writing this letter to e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, so, still, therefore, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 731.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51234567901 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50051815999 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1395663902 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.1 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131604901354 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421213963402 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458943041526 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761738542915 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370390205054 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.