Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Famous entertainers and athletes deserve to have more privacy than they have now. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
privacy is should be given to every individual to live their life without other attention. Due to more globalization and digitalization, the privacy of the most of the famous people remain to questionable. media and public trace out them wherever they go and whatever they eat and rarely have freedom to act as at least there is somebody to present their to watch over them. In my opinion, I strongly believe that they have less privacy at present moment and deserve to have more secular time. what I follow, I will conspicuously present my reasons cogently.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that media are all over in the world and search for the potential celebrity news. they will follow them rushly in order to accrue some important information about their life. As a result, they have been deprived from the solitude which is basic right of the human. For instance, I read a couple of news about the popular person daily; where they go, to whom they meet, what purpose to they go there. From this, it seems that they do not have private sphere to enjoy whatever they do in secret, it will come out eventually in the public even they like it or not. this cause little bit hectic and enervating in their mind. In some cases, they misbehave in public to the reporter making their image even worse. Since, every one need some alone time, they also should be given that space to relief their pressure.
Secondly, another reasons that deserve some words to say is that even celebrities need some secular time to thrive from mental lustre. Pressure from work, public, do different event, etc are always in their mind. In fact, this humdrum and life struggle may cause them mental weariness. To recover from mental illness, they also need some alone time that other public should provide. However, in the era of media propaganda, they will constantly dogged by the other people and that may restrain them to do fine at that moment. In addition, we might not may find the quality work from the celebrity in the future if we do not let them personal space to rejuvenate.
Lastly, the aforementioned reaosn is the first one that comes in mind at the first glance, there is no means only reason available. In fact, there must be one subtle reasons borne in the mind. celebrity were most encountered by the speculation in contemporary situation. Whether it likeliness are certain or not, all the media dig out the news and most often make it propoganda where false news add up to spice up the content. having this ritual in today's era, celebrity might have to face the absurd and rediculous question. Moreover, someytimes the false news may ruin the celebrity reputation in great extent. Thus, celebrity are the properties of the nation, we should let them flourish by not asking them spurious inquiry.
In conclusion, celebrity now have to face a lot of media at once and almost all time that may deface their mental health. So, we have to cautious that they need some private space after all they are also human.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, after all, at least, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2522.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 530.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75849056604 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79809637944 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41819082155 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481132075472 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 801.9 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2476175483 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0714285714 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18092750084 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527209380601 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527042285198 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116653867594 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566800756204 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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