You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course
Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter
Describe what you enjoyed about the course
Say how much cooking you’ve done since the course
Suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer
Dear sir or madam,
Dear sir or madam，
I am writing a letter to provide a feedback on the cookery course “chopping for cuisine”,which I take recently from your renowned institute.
The course was fascinating as I was able to learn about how to chop the fish meat from the salmon and rolled into the stick Japanese rice to make the sushi. The teacher is a great chef who came from a five star hotel and demonstrate the whole process to us that we could learn fast.
I have used what I learned from the your class and cooked for my family at weekend, and my family member give me excellent remarks for what I cooked. The effect of the course had on my techniques of chopping and how to make a delicious and appetizing cuisine.
But I think beside the chopping technique which I learned from class, will your cookery class consider to provide the bakery class as well. Most people are not good at baking because they don’t know how to prepare the raw material and the use of electric oven properly.
I am looking forward to hear from you
Yours Faithfully
Elliot
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
... course 'chopping for cuisine',which I take recently from your renowned inst...
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Line 5, column 278, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fast'
Suggestion: to fast
...whole process to us that we could learn fast. I have used what I learned from the ...
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Line 7, column 33, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'your'?
Suggestion: the; your
...fast. I have used what I learned from the your class and cooked for my family at weeke...
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Line 9, column 95, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider providing'.
Suggestion: consider providing
...ned from class, will your cookery class consider to provide the bakery class as well. Most people a...
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Line 11, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...c oven properly. I am looking forward to hear from you Yours Faithfully Ell...
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Line 11, column 38, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I am looking forward to hear from you Yours Faithfully Elliot
^^^^
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ard to hear from you Yours Faithfully Elliot
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64921465969 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65438313783 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623036649215 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.3640937201 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 76.5299724578 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248401426961 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100005466526 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741408991263 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112325532669 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930109358581 0.0580467560999 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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