You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter
● describe the problem with the equipment
● explain what happened when you phoned the shop
● say what you would like the manager to do
DEAR SIR,
I AM WRITING THIS LETTER REGARDING THE GRINDER WHICH I HAD BOUGHT FROM YOUR PREMISES, A WEEK AGO. THE MACHINE IS NO LONGER WORKING AND IS THE REASON FOR MY CONCERN.
RECENTLY, AFTER PURCHASING THE ELECTRICAL DEVICE WE STARTED USING IT FROM THE VERY NEXT DAY. FORTUNATELY IT FUNCTIONED WELL TILL FOUR DAYS AND THEN SUDDENLY STOPPED WORKING. ON FRIDAY AFTERNOON, I TURNED ON THE SWITCH OF THE GRINDER TO USE IT, TO MY SURPRISE A PINCH OF FIRE SPARKLED THE CORNER OF WIRE. IMMEDIATELY I TURNED OFF THE ELECTRIC SUPPLY AND FROM THAT MOMENT ITSELF THE APPLIANCE HAS WITHDRAWN FROM ITS FUNCTION.
I HAD CALLED THE CUSTOMER CARE EXECUTIVE OF YOUR SHOP. THEY HAD ASSURED ME TO VISIT MY PLACE WITH A TECHNICIAN AND GET IT REPAIRED BY SATURDAY ITSELF. IT HAS BEEN 3 DAYS AND I HAVE NOT HEARD FROM HIM AS OF NOW.
I WOULD LIKE YOU TO LOOK INTO THE MATTER AND FASTEN UP THE PROCESS.
YOURS FAITHFULLY
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
DEAR SIR, I AM WRITING THIS LETTER REGARDING THE G...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, regarding, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 752.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58536585366 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48250122137 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.69512195122 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2825037572 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131005203395 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511683321807 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542578920944 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0799698055675 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588383571092 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.