Land loss
The chart gives out information about areas of land damaged by human activities in four major continents of the world.
The damaged land in Africa and Asia are similar, approximately 1200 million hectares for each, while in Australia and Europe, the numbers are considerably lower, averaging between 300 and 400 million.
Looking at the graph, in Africa, Europe and Australia, breeding is the leading cause of land loss, damaging roughly 500, 100 and 200 million hectares of land respectively. Next comes tree-cutting which takes away slightly larger areas of land than farming in all the three regions.
Asia shows a slightly different picture, where tree-cutting and farming make up the most for the loss of land (450 and 420 million, in turn). The remaining cause belongs to breeding with 390 million hectares of land.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 704.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 134.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25373134328 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65945063058 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664179104478 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 200.7 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2771795979 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.333333333 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345427391024 0.215688989381 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170351846626 0.103423049105 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090868092966 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201407064449 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104872039686 0.0819641961636 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.