any recent invention that you think proverbs beneficial or detrimental to society
every recent inventions are useful for own purpuse and for the society there are some inventions in disfunctioning and some are in
positive way but we find many inventions in positive helping and guiding people and society which makes people comfortable
firstly there are many new inventions in couple of sectors they helps in educational,medications,automobiles,mobile phones. inventors keep on
updating these invention because in india there is a huge demand in new inventions . recently in automobile sector,inventors have invented
a new four wheeler and two wheeler running in battery.single time of electricity plug in give you 150 km for bike and 450 km for car running.
consequently phone sectors,engineers are used to update their phones for every six months because in india we find many competitors
are competing to get new inventions so that can reach huge in demand among the population but in other way inventions are more beneficial to society
there are some inventions got collapsed recently. there was a news published in Tamil nadu about mallfunctining in wind mills which consist
electricity got burnt due to climatic coditions moreover there are some disfunctining inventions due to the fluctuation of electricity.
so we should have only the government approved inventions,so that would be safe to your surroundings and your self as well.
to conclude new inventions are beneficial many inventions that helps to society and helps for your purpuse but we do have some disfunctioning
inventions so that,most important rule is about getting government approved so we can have it in beneficial and safe way
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56031128405 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.89908802756 2.71678728327 144% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517509727626 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.5024630542 176% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.041215996 50.4703680194 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 204.142857143 104.977214359 194% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.7142857143 20.9669160288 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.12807881773 291% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 29.0 5.33497536946 544% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213165148476 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102575216693 0.0925447433944 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060809440187 0.071462118173 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881731342712 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696500311192 0.0609392437508 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.1 12.6369458128 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 53.1260098522 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.9458128079 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.56 11.5310837438 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.3980295567 158% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.5123152709 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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