the trend of increasing tourism causes environmental problems in many parts of the world.what are the main causes of pollution it creates?what can be done to reduce it ?
yes i agree,causes of increasing tourism gets trouble,due to cause of pollution creates in many parts of world. so we find that tourism should be allowed in only specified places and specified
months and there are many more ways should be done to reduce the environmental problems
firstly we find people using government transports like train to travel from a place to another so we call it as mass transportation. so government should raise a rule to the public that people are
only allowed in the vacation seasons not more than that,hence we find more population at that time they are :{air pollution,land pollution,water pollution,sound pollution ect ..}
youngsters are used to gang up themselves and prepare themselves for a journey by two wheeler are called air pollution consequently we find many people and small kids use to throw garbage in clean land
and in pure water these are the simple cause.through this we find many types of environmental problems like heavy rainfall by the smoke evaporation as we studied in secondary schools
so government should look forward after all these pollution and causes of many environmental problems furthermore they should bring many rules for every tourism places like using of non pollution
vehicles and its more comfortable when they take government vehicles government should provide some strict rules for the public of not polluting the land with the wastes respectively they should thrown
only in recycle bins or dust bins.so these kind of changes brings the tourism place more in only positive way not in negative.
to conclude increasing of tourism is really good but government should apply some steps and rules for the causes of pollution,though we find environment problems also been acomplished and people who are in
vacation feels even more comfortable and these are the possible ways to reduce environmental problems
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, look, really, second, so, after all, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 5.75862068966 365% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1207.87684729 136% => OK
No of words: 304.0 242.827586207 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40460526316 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00003404084 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516447368421 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 379.143842365 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6551724138 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 76.0 20.5024630542 371% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 411.245364716 50.4703680194 815% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 410.75 104.977214359 391% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 76.0 20.9669160288 362% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.25 7.25397266985 376% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.12807881773 266% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 5.33497536946 431% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224481824048 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204067593134 0.0925447433944 221% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119510590688 0.071462118173 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107877932614 0.151781067708 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104481857508 0.0609392437508 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.0 12.6369458128 332% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -5.66 53.1260098522 -11% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.54236453202 223% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.9 10.9458128079 301% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.22 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.32886699507 123% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.94827586207 181% => OK
gunning_fog: 32.4 10.3980295567 312% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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