The chart below shows the percentage of household in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011
The bar chart describes the proportion of families who lived in private home and contract home in England and Wales from 1918 until 2011.
It is clear that the proportion of rented house was higher than own possessed house before 1971. After 1971, the percentage of private accommodation was higher than rented house.
On 1918, the number of families possessed their houses just one-fourth of families who lived in contract houses. On two figured years, 1939 and 1953, the percentage of families who lived in rented house almost doubled than families who possessed their houses. Moreover, on 1961, the percentage private accommodations and contract accommodations was approximately 40% and 60% respectively.
Throughout 30 years, from 1981 until 2001, the proportion self-possessed houses dramatically rose compared with contract houses and reached the peak on 1991 and 2001 which almost doubled. Furthermore, on 2011, the percentage of rented accommodations slightly increased in comparison with private houses with 35% and 65% respectively.
- The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information 89
- Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.Discuss both these views and gi 73
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 73
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 334, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...te houses with 35% and 65% respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69182389937 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09511929636 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522012578616 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1445721595 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.125 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 5.23603664747 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20140159341 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101391574541 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624789088152 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130362658392 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401236621299 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 11.4140731707 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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