The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart compared the proportion of households in owned and rented accommodation from 1918 to 2011 in two countries.
In summary, the percentage of households in owned domicile was higher than rented place. Moreover, the number of family in owned accommodation in the raising trend, and the rented accommodation was in the opposite trend.
According to the graph, before 1971, the percentage of households in rented accommodation in the UK and Wales was higher than owned place. Household in owned accommodation accounted for 22% in 1918, which occupied the lowest proportion. At the same time, households in owned accommodation made up the highest percentage, which accounted for 78%.
As we can seen from the chart which clearly highlights the percentage between households in owned and rented were in the same, both accounted for 50% in 1971. Moreover, after 1971, the percentage of households in rented accommodation was lower than owned place. There are 69% of households in owned accommodation in 2001, however, the rented accommodation just accounted for 31% of households.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 11, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'see' or 'be seen'?
Suggestion: see; be seen
... which accounted for 78%. As we can seen from the chart which clearly highlights...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36627906977 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13446511421 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.447674418605 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.1555088702 43.030603864 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.555555556 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283966445297 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153879925168 0.103423049105 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354322745318 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208711824456 0.15604864568 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027570337396 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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