Some people say that Olympic Games will not be required in 21st century. Do you agree or disagree?
Olympic Games is the biggest international multi-sport event in the world for many years, but it is argued that it will not be taken place in this decade. I strongly disagree with this statement and shall put forth my arguments to support my view in the following paragraphs.
During years, Olympic Games has played an important role in countries individually and the world generally. Every Olympic Games, there are thousands of athletes competing in many kinds of sports, which means the influence of it is very big. Our next Olympic Games 2020 in Japan is a prime example, when the athletes comes to 11,091 people in expectation. Moreover, Olympic Games is an event when sportsperson can communicate, learn each other's skills, so that we can form good relationships among people from many countries.
Olympic Games is an occasion when host country can show their culture and so can their tourism. They will have many activities and advantages for not only people who visit the country but also for viewers who cannot join it, they can see from TV, watch matches and enjoy the host's features. And as nature, after every Olympic Games, there are more and more visitors come to the host's country. World Cup is a good proof, when finishing this biggest international association football competition, the rate of tourism of the host's country raises quickly and give billions of dollars for the government.
In conclusion, although there are many other sport events are hold annually, Olympic Games still stand firmly in every person' s heart, symbolize the unity and togetherness of five continents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'athletes'' or 'athlete's'?
Suggestion: athletes'; athlete's
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, still, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08301886792 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6663094575 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592452830189 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1152144312 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.454545455 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162827676048 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655660861409 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392971194486 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999989731044 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356214477629 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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