Central and local goverenments make a frantic attempt to promote festivals to create a lot of revenue. Some people think this money should be invested in social programmes for the poor
There is no denying that goverentment spending a lot af money for creating intertainment places such as festivals or for making good place for getting money back. However some people think that money which is spending for intertainment should be given to the poor families. I would argue that money should be given to the poor people as a charity.
Firstly and foremost there are people with different entourage some of them are poor but some of them are extremely rich. But poor people can not imbibe themselves. However goverenment should create charity programmes in which rich people, or people who can donate to them some money or something as a gift . Goverenment should take a responsibility to create this kind of atmosphere for poor people .If goverenment can create that charity programmes they will be more successful than creating intertainment places.
On the other hand creating entertainment places can have a good income because of participants of many people. We know that when theirva huge number of people they buy more products such as drinks and snacks or fast food. After getting that income goverenment can spend approximately half of that money which earned from intertainment places and festivals. Furthermore that people will give money back when they will be successful or when they get a good job. To make intertainment places is not bad idea but helping that poor people can help to them more to be healthy and to find good job in which they can earn muvh money and they will be more income to the goverenment.
Taking everything into account from both opinions goverenment can have income but it should be responsibility of the goverenment to provide people with thing which they need. It will have more benefit to the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95608108108 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77709817214 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462837837838 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.996798619 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.785714286 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327604576956 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133510135636 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923421853018 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223726852661 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115065272992 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.