Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better caregivers for their young children.
Discuss both the views with your opinion.
It is often argued that the pre-schoolers are taken much care in childcare centres while some would say that the parents of one's father or mother are the best care-takers when the child's parents are out for work. Although the daycare has all the facilities for a child as they are paid heavily to supervise, I believe that blood relatives of a child watch them with extra care without negligence because they are related by blood.
On the one hand, the childcare centres cater the toddlers who are not yet ready for going to school with excellent care and safety because they are given a huge amount of money for their services. This is to say that if they fail to care for the kids, the organisation is questioned so they may religiously feed and make them sleep on time. When they serve this as a duty, the result is a lack of special love and compassion that a child requires during that stage of his or her life. It is also seen in rare cases that the care-takers resort to scolding or punishing to pacify the crying child. For example, the Newyork Times published that 60% of South Indian childcare centres are booked for physically abusing the child. Due to these shortcomings, I believe that the children should be left with their family members such as grandparents instead of relying on the daycare centres.
On the other hand, blood-related members of a child can take care of the kids during the working hours of their parents and it is the best way because blood is thicker than water. This means that with the utmost care, love and affection they feed them, clothe them, bathe them and soothe them with short naps at an appropriate time. They also try to protect them from potential dangers and provide them with the bed of roses when they miss their parents. When I was almost 5 years, for instance, my parents would leave me with my grandmother. I used to enjoy her company because she always pacified my tantrums by offering different delicacies and confectionaries also when I would get hurt accidentally she felt very disheartened. So, I believe that instead of leaving pre-schoolers under childcare supervision, they must be left with grandparents who will take care without any delinquency.
In conclusion, while childcare centres take care of pre-school kids as part of their duty, they sometimes tend to be strict with them whereas the family members such as grandmothers or grandfathers deal patiently and affectionately with their grandkids in the absence of parents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...hile some would say that the parents of ones father or mother are the best care-take...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 59.0 24.0651302605 245% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2076.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 431.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81670533643 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67200376403 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510440835267 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 625.5 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.0509888903 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.4 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7333333333 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245341058609 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910100379289 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710874755511 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168833236814 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195408770129 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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