Many governments think economic progress is their important goal. Some people however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is true that in many aspects development of of a country mostly depends on its grow in economy. However, some people point out that other kinds of progress as vital as increasing economy which we will discuss now.
Om the one hand, it is said that, if a country better of its population will have numerous opportunities in terms of living comfortable lives and having access to better quality of healthcare and education. For instance, we can see some countries such USA, Germany which are thought to mainly focus on making progress economically. Moreover, as a country is developing financially it will create more job prospects for people which in turn increse rhe position of people.
On the other hand, the goverments are believed that, they should have other targets other than boosting economy. Firstly, it does not always imply that people will have happiness as long as their country is reach. Take an example of USA, according to report announced by USA itself, people's salaries have been increasing significantly whilst some survey which is used to measure the rate of happiness of people has showed that even though they are earning twice as much than they ised to they do not feel content. In other words it proves that being reach is not the most important.
Furthermore, many authorities are to blame for some factors that, they solely look for ways to make a countey to make more money. There are many issues which are taken beyond the economy such as environmental problems. In many cases the goverments do not take the consequences of deterioration of nature seriously.
Overall, it might be said incresing the growth in the economy has become the most important task for governments. But I think the goverments must have been taking every necessary aspect into accaunt.
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'aspects'' or 'aspect's'?
Suggestion: aspects'; aspect's
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Suggestion: of
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Suggestion:
...education. For instance, we can see some countries such USA, Germany which are th...
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Suggestion: as
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Suggestion:
...e are many issues which are taken beyond the economy such as environmental proble...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, for instance, i think, such as, in many cases, in other words, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9504950495 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66490972413 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574257425743 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1841368756 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.142857143 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3571428571 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173678271089 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589971698064 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422679335883 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989134050377 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328821661631 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.