Some people argue that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others believe that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Some people would just accept any dissatisfaction in their daily lives or jobs whereas others think that it would be better to overcome these situations. While accepting a bad situation seems to take less energy and effort, I believe that people will enjoy their lives better if they choose to fight these odds.
One the one hand, individuals can save their own effort and energy when they choose to settle with unfavourable situations. This is because thinking about the resolutions for any problems they face could take days and nights, and this certainly brings stress and exhaustion to them. For example, many new graduates in Vietnam say that they would always choose jobs that are not related to their professions because these jobs are much easier to apply for. However, I think that being submissive to bad situations will not be beneficial to people in the long-term.
On the other hand, those who take actions against their odds would have a chance to secure an enjoyable life when they succeed. This is to say, the reward after people overcome their hard time brings happiness to them and, thus, increases the satisfaction in their lives. For instance, Bill Gates used to struggle with his first project but, instead of giving up, he chose to finish it at all cost and created his company. Today, he leads a wonderful life with his family while being the richest man on earth. In my opinion, I believe that giving efforts to thrive through bad situations is better than doing nothing because it is a completely rewarding process.
In conclusion, despite the fact that it is less energy-consuming when people just accept their bad situations, I believe that trying to improve these circumstances is a much better way to secure a happy life in the long-term.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, thus, whereas, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90365448505 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58632699342 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56146179402 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.2952907915 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0833333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186112899015 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723954737374 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650156857257 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128404030031 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454837025956 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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