You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
• Explain why you want to take time off work
• Give details of the amount of time you need
• Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away
Dear Mr. Refiee,
I am writing this letter to request three days pay off work.
It was about a week ago that I talked to you and expressed why I get to work unpunctual. Because of the location of my home which is in skirt of city, my commuting to work is too time-consuming. So, I decided to move on new house which is close to company.
I have to hand in my ex-accommodation on 31st March, on Tuesday. So, I need two extra days one before and one after to packing and unpacking of my furniture. Overall, I need three days to take off work.
The days before starting of being away from work, I will handover my tasks to Mr. Rahimi who is cooperating with me in doing of these tasks and familiar to procedure. Moreover, during the days off I will be online and Mr. Rahimi can contact me for any questions or hesitations.
Dealing in mind the circumstance, I trust you will kindly let me be off working during that days.
Your faithfully,
Sahar
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng that days. Your faithfully, Sahar
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36516853933 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70100884985 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606741573034 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.149368729 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6363636364 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1818181818 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253340701664 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958201059107 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757644021097 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130160275499 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479568878904 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng that days. Your faithfully, Sahar
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36516853933 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70100884985 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606741573034 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.149368729 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6363636364 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1818181818 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253340701664 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958201059107 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757644021097 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130160275499 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479568878904 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.