Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers.Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Undoubtedly, the number of substantial associations and massive industries is increasing day by day which drastically affects the way we life .Therefore, it is thought that these institutions should be relocated from crowded urban areas to rural places. This essay will argue that the benefits of this movement far exceeds its drawbacks. Both aspects will be investigated prior to reaching any conclusion.
It is an indisputable fact that companies and huge factories produce more and more rubbish whose effect gives rise to pollution in highly populated cities and towns .As a result, the deteriorated quality of air ,water and surroundings is noticeably clear. Hence , citizens’ health is seriously endangered. Besides, by moving to the suburbs, these businesses and manufacturing plants can provide local residents with convenient job opportunities, especially in poor areas which will unquestionably lessen the emigration rate to cities . Consequently, the social standards will improve , thus boosting the economic activity and developing the countryside.
Nonetheless, minor obstacles might arise from such a transfer. Many rural regions suffer from inadequate infra structure such as supplies of water,electricity ,and internet connection which is essential for leading the work. Eventually, this may reduce the profits of the organization. However, proper planning will not impact the work.
On balance, shifting companies and factories to remote zones is beneficial . It will minimize pollution and provide work chances to the local citizens. Obviously ,the merits surpass the demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, hence, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus, as to, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82478632479 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21225288605 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.709401709402 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 75.7221020224 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3571428571 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0732692385135 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0180621886496 0.084324248473 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0238205667316 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0391801472349 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182547458038 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.18 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.04 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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