Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news. However, others believe that they can learn news more effectively through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
it is a well-established fact that the best way to learn news is through newspapers but some deem that other media is more effectively than newspapers. my viewpoint will be elucidated in this essay.
Traditionally, people acquire knowledge from books, newspaper,... because they think it contains a wide range of information which they would like to know and discover. Example,in the past, when they didn't know how to cook pasta, they immediately went to the library to find some recipe. However, in the digital era, the only thing we should do is go to the internet to search the recipe. it is easier.
Thus, what I mean is I totally agree and believe in media. In my opinion, now we have smartphones, laptop and you are a modern person, so you should be likely to use it to alleviate your work. Alternative, techniques might do everything for you. when you stay at home you could finish your work, go to shopping, order something for your meal from a large number of apps,... so convenient! Furthermore, at the moment, we are studying online with app supported but I think it is the greatest way. Moreover, in Google has a plethora of information where you can find the things you need and included newspapers. Admittedly, our society are changing rapidly, study through a back copy is out of date. If you would like to read news at the morning, you should go on online newspapers which have many news in all over the world. On the other hand, you should select the news on the internet because it contains crime news or murder which is not appreciate for children.
In conclusion, I prefer learning through media than newspapers because it is more effectively and convenient. Nevertheless, you may depend on the techniques and it made you lazy. Therefore, you should control yourself and manage the time during use it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, i mean, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77602523659 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81123710591 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564668769716 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1252821592 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6842105263 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6842105263 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94736842105 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254801667316 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717474956164 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105384299066 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173029951337 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103629387017 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.